1. Commas practice--
*Add commas where necessary:
The cold impersonal atmosphere of the animal shelter was intensified by the hunchbacked janitor the awful smell and the cat's pupils that stared at me narrowing to small black shining slits.
*Take out all unnecessary commas:
On the television, was a commercial for hot, spicy foods such as, chili, kung pao chicken, and buffalo wings.
2. Today, work on finishing, editing, revising, and proofreading your essay!
*Remember to MLA format
*Cite all evidence/ideas that are not yours, lest you plagiarize
*Read it out loud to yourself to catch simple mistakes
*Don't be afraid to cut out things that are not working and revise them.
HW--*Submit essay to turnitin.com by class-time tomorrow, and turn in a physical copy (printed and stapled) at the beginning of class. Print at home--the ARC is not always reliable.
*Tomorrow, bring a picture or evidence of your Art project so I can see your progress; do not bring in your art project until the day you present (which means you can still polish/revise after tomorrow).
*See the order of presentations here, and put it on your calendar; you can find this at the top of the Romoe & Juliet project page.
*Have your Indie read book with you this week; you might find random times in class when you have time to read it.
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